Sphere is an interesting and ironic name for such a boxy robot.
I like his design, especially the head and neck.
Sphere is an interesting and ironic name for such a boxy robot.
I like his design, especially the head and neck.
yeah, ironic isn't it?
These are certainly classic characters. You made them recognizable and even threw in the slime that was common in the show.
One general thing I can recommend is to look at a reference image when drawing certain things. Ren's head and arm shape for example might have looked better in its original style.
Though that is speculation, I didn't check.
The chest piece is pretty nice.
I'm not sure what could be done to the left shoulder besides maybe some more metallic sheen like what the right shoulder has, just speculation though.
The style reminds me of illustrations in a D&D monster manual or some sort of logbook.
The texture and angles on the head are especially nice.
Dude, i love the D&D illustrations, specially the Todd Lockwood's draws.
I've been unscoutd for posting much much better then this.
I recommend relabeling it as a sketch.
The horn texture is nice.
Thank you! :D
The art, character wise, looks fine. What is recommended for completion is something to fill the void of white, like a texture or background.
Thanks for taking time to make a critique!! In my last drawings I´m adding some background color for all of your eyes sake!! And if you like my art, you can also see my process in my Youtube channel, there are speedpaints of my last drawings starting with these Bastion here. The link is in my last drawings.
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The lighting, atmosphere, and overall composition look like an improvement over your earlier works.
I like purple hair in general but didn't realize those kinds of straight bangs fitted on the side of the head as well as the front. The side bangs look like they have the straightness of jewelry and seem to work.
It's actually called a "hime" cut, and is somewhat common with anime characters (though I don't see it too often in real life). Personally, I like those a ton.
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